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Monarchk's Amazing Race Episode 1
« on: Mar 5th, 2005, 7:39pm »
Episode One-Part One "This is not good!"
 
Monarchk stands in the middle of a horseshoe formed by the 11 teams. “In a few seconds, you’ll be starting on Monarchk’s Amazing Race. The rules are the same as the normal Amazing Race. There will be 12 legs, 9 of them will be elimination. You’re first clue is on your luggage. The world awaits…travel safe…GO!”
 
Instantly all the teams ran past them in a mad dash to their luggage. Cliff and Jason arrived first and opened their clue, “Drive yourself to LAX in a marked car and pick up the next clue in the parking lot. You will have $200 for this leg of the race,” Cliff read. “Let’s go Jason!”
 
Cliff and Jason ran to the cars, with Dennis and Denise, David and Kailee, and Pyotr and Erin closest behind.
 
Soon, the brothers were off leaving the other ten teams behind. “Yeah! Go Jason!” Cliff yelled as his brother sped down the highway.
 
“Did you see those other teams?” Jason asked. “By the time we got in our car, some of them were still reading their clue!”
 
“This won’t be too hard,” Cliff smiled.
 
Soon, David and Kailee were on the road, trying to catch up to frontrunner Cliff and Jason. In about two minutes after David and Kailee left, every other team had joined them on the road to LAX.
 
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“Well, the clue we got was pretty weird. Normally, the first clue tells you to go to a country, but this one said go to the LAX airport parking lot. Now unless, there was a security lockdown in the airport, and the people inside revolted to overthrow the security officers, the LAX airport parking lot is not currently a separate country,” said Sarah.
 
“We just passed a team,” Jude said, looking out the window.
 
“Oh good,” Sarah said, smiling. “Who was it?”
 
“It was two guys. I wasn’t looking to closely at them,” Jude said.
 
“Well, there were two all-male teams and the first one sped off into the sunset, I hope they fall off a bridge or something. So we must’ve passed the Mexican and Russian.”
 
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“Hey, Camille,” Jasmine said, from the driver’s seat of the car. “Look out your window. We’re passing the New York Minutes!”
 
“Oh yeah, it’s those two blonde girls. How’d you know they were from New York?” Camille asked.
 
”You can always tell,” Jasmine smiled as she passed the team.
 
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“Daniel,” Abigail said, peering out the window. “I don’t see anyone behind us. I think we’re last.”
 
“It’s okay, Abigail, calm down. We’ll catch up at the airport. You know how those flights are,” Daniel said, focusing on the road. “And besides ther- OH MY GOD! Is that the grandparents?”
 
“Yeah, that’s them!” Abigail said, shocked. “It looks like they crashed on the side of the road!” Abigail continued to look at the crash, thinking deeply about something, and finally added, “Daniel, stop the car. We’re helping them out!”
 
Daniel sighed. He wanted to keep going and get out of last place, but knew that the whole point of going out with his sister was to let her do her own thing for once. “Okay, we’re stopping, but not for long!” Daniel pulled over and Abigail jumped out.
 
“Hey there,” Abigail said, smiling as she joined them in staring at the wreckage that was once a car. “Are you two going to be all right?”
 
“We’ll be fine, bless your heart,” Dotty said.
 
“We’ve been allowed another car,” put in Steve. “It’ll be coming shortly. Thanks for stopping though.”
 
“Okay, glad to see you’ll be fine. We’ll be going then. Bye!” Abigail said as she jumped back into the car.
 
“Bye!” the grandparents waved back. As Daniel and Abigail drove away, Dotty turned to Steve and said, “They’re just like little angels, but we never found out what their names were.”
 
“That’s right!” said Steve. “Oh well, we’ll find them later. I see our car coming.”
 
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Cliff and Jason arrived first at LAX, with David and Kailee very close behind. They parked the car and jumped out. “Okay, we need to search the parking lot for a clue box. We shouldn’t split up, because if we shout to each other it will be a dead giveaway to the other teams,” said Jason.
 
“We’ll travel together, then, but we’ve got to hurry! Teams are coming!” Cliff said. The two ran off just as David and Kailee pulled in.
 
“Those two are still ahead of us,” Kailee said.
 
“We’ve got to stop them,” David said, “but first, we’ve got to find the clue box.”
 
“Well, this parking lot is huge. It will be pretty difficult,” Kailee said.
 
“It will be even harder if we just stand here and talk. Let’s move!” David shouted. The two ran in the opposite direction the brothers took.
 
Dennis and Denise and Pyotr and Erin arrived at around the same time. The two teams got out of the car. Pyotr and Erin ran the way the brothers went earlier, and the twins followed, hoping to break off later.
 
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“Found it!” one person shouted.
 
“Be quiet!” shouted his teammate. “Let’s get out of the way, then read it.”
 
The two moved a few meters away then read, “Get on one of these three flights to Guatemala City! United Flight A357, AA Flight A453, or AA Flight A294.”
 
“They didn’t list the times.”
 
“We’ll just have to find them out ourselves then,” the first teammate said. “C’mon Kailee, let’s go!”
 
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Ken and Cris, the married parents, were the next to arrive at the parking lot. “What did the clue say to do, Ken?” Cris asked.
 
“We have to look for a clue in the parking lot,” Ken answered.
 
“How about instead of going on foot, we’ll drive around in the car to look for it,” Cris suggested. “If we see it, we’ll remember the spot, park our car a few spaces away, and grab the clue.”
 
“Good idea, Cris!” Ken answered. “Okay, let’s do it.”
 
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“I don’t see it, Jason,” Cliff said after searching for ten minutes. “Do you think it could be on the other side?”
 
“It’s a large parking lot. It may be this way,” Jason answered.
 
“My concern is that David and Kailee may have already found it because they went the other way,” Cliff said.
 
“Or they may not have found it and we’re going the right way,” Jason said.
 
“Okay, fine,” Cliff said. “We’ll keep going this way then.”
 
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Erin tapped Pyotr on the shoulder. “What, Erin?” Pyotr asked.
 
“Two things. One, there’s a team following us. Two, it’s been fifteen minutes and we haven’t found the clue yet. I think we should turn around,” Erin said.
 
Pyotr turned around and saw Dennis and Denise were tagging along. “Hey, you two. What are your names again?”
 
“I’m Dennis and this is Denise. We’re fraternal twins,” Dennis said.
 
“Well, I’m Pyotr,” Pyotr said, “and this is my fiancée Erin.”
 
The teams shook hands, and then Erin said, “Okay, twins. Here’s the deal. Either you stop following us or we ally. Take your pick.”
 
“That’s easy,” Denise said. “We’re going to ally.”
 
“Okay,” Pyotr said. “Then, we’ve got to turn around and look for the clue back that way.” Pyotr pointed to the opposite direction they were going. The twins agreed and soon the new alliance went looking for the clue again.
 
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“There it is, Ken!” Cris said. “It’s a few spaces away. Let’s park it!”
 
Ken parked the car and the couple ran for the clue. After reading it the two grabbed a passing shuttle for the terminal. “American or United?” Ken asked.
 
“American has more choices,” Cris said. “It’d be safer to pick them.”
 
“They could both be the last two flights in,” Ken pointed out.
 
“American is the first terminal we’re getting to,” said Cris. “Why don’t we just get out of the shuttle and check?”
 
“Okay,” said Ken, “We’ll do it.”
 
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Soon, everyone was at the airport parking lot, including Dotty and Steve. Even with so many people at the airport, the only teams with clues were David and Kailee, Ken and Cris, Allison and Andrea, and Sarah and Jude.
 
Meanwhile, Pyotr and Erin and Dennis and Denise were getting very close to the box. “There it is!” shouted Dennis.
 
Now six teams had clues, and five teams didn’t. After reading the clue, Erin said, “We need to borrow a cell phone once we get in the shuttle. We need to confirm these flight times.”
 
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In the parking lot, Alonzo and James had decided that they’d cover more ground if they split up. “You’ll go left, I’ll go right,” Alonzo said. “If someone gets the clue, we’ll find each other somehow and get going.”
 
“Alonzo, the parking lot is huge. It won’t be that hard to lose each other,” James said. “We need to be sure of how we’ll find each other.”
 
“Don’t worry, James. We can do it,” Alonzo said, as he ran to the left side of the parking lot.
 
“Okay, I’m trusting you!” James shouted as he ran the other way.
 
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“So that’s the time the United flight leaves? And the AA flights are when? Okay, thank you,” Erin said as she finished her conversation and handed the phone back to the owner.
 
“What flight should we get on?” Dennis asked.
 
“We’re getting on an American flight. They’re both faster than the United one,” Erin said. “Here’s our stop. Let’s go!”
 
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In the lot, two more teams, Jasmine and Camille and Daniel and Abigail found their clue, leaving only Alonzo and James, Cliff and Jason, and Dotty and Steve clueless. James was going to change that for his team though. “There it is!” James said. He grabbed a clue and then turned around to find Alonzo.
 
“Alonzo! Alonzo!” he shouted. Nearby, Dotty and Steve watched him run past.
 
“He’s got a clue in his hands,” Dotty noted.
 
“The box must be down that way! We have to hurry!” Steve said, as the grandparents rushed to the box and claimed their clue.
 
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“I’m telling you, Jason!” Cliff prodded. “We’re going the wrong way! The clue isn’t down here! I bet everyone’s found it by now!”
 
“Cliff, you shut up and follow me,” Jason said.
 
From behind them, they heard a faint shout. “ALONZO!” It was James.
 
Alonzo turned around. “WHAT IS IT?”
 
“I FOUND THE CLUE!” James shouted. “IT WAS ON MY SIDE OF THE LOT!”
 
Cliff turned to Jason. “See!”
 
“Shut up and run!” Jason said. The two of them rushed to make up time.
 
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“So,” Ken said, sitting in the airport terminal, “It’s Pyotr and Erin, Dennis and Denise, myself and Cris, Sarah and Jude, and David and Kailee all on the first flight to Guatemala.”
 
“We’re not sure if any more teams can get on the flight. We’re hoping not, six would be a lot of teams on one flight,” Cris smiled.
 
A few minutes later, Jasmine and Camille walked in, tickets in hand. “What flight did you get?” Ken asked.
 
“We got the second flight. It arrives at 7 PM,” Jasmine said.
 
“Our flight arrives at 5:30!” Sarah whispered to Jude.
 
“First boarding call for American Airlines flight A294, bound for Guatemala City,” called the loudspeaker.
 
“Well, that’s us!”  Pyotr said, getting his bag. “See ya!”
 
Jasmine and Camille stood in shock as they watched the five teams leave. “It’s 4:30 PM and they’re already leaving?” Jasmine gasped.
 
“They’ll arrive at 5:30!” Camille said. “They’ll be there an hour-and-a-half before us!”
 
“This is not good!” Jasmine said, dropping her bags in a seat.
 
Part 2 Coming to a Post Near You…
 
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Re: Monarchk's Amazing Race Episode 1
« Reply #1 on: Mar 5th, 2005, 8:15pm »
thanks its a really good story but there are so many teams im getting them mixed up....
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Re: Monarchk's Amazing Race Episode 1
« Reply #2 on: Mar 6th, 2005, 1:20am »
There's only 11. Most of these stories have 15. But, yeah I see what you mean. Don't worry though. Because of the flight schedule for this leg, they'll be discussed in groups as the people from the different flights don't get to see each other after this point. So, you already know the first group is David/Kailee, Pyotr/Erin, Dennis/Denise, Sarah/Jude, and Ken/Cris. Also Jasmine/Camille are in the second flight. So you'll just have to wait to find out who joins the Fil-Am friends on the second flight.  Smiley
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Re: Monarchk's Amazing Race Episode 1
« Reply #3 on: Mar 6th, 2005, 6:14am »
Nice start.  I like it.  I find this to be slightly more detailed than the other ones I've read, probably becaue of the dialogues.  Good job.  Smiley
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Re: Monarchk's Amazing Race Episode 1
« Reply #4 on: Mar 6th, 2005, 6:39am »
Grin Thanks arfan!
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« Reply #5 on: Mar 6th, 2005, 6:07pm »
IT was awesome when is the next part coming out>?
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Re: Monarchk's Amazing Race Episode 1
« Reply #6 on: Mar 7th, 2005, 2:21am »
Eventually.   Grin Won't be too long though. I work on it everyday.
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Re: Monarchk's Amazing Race Episode 1
« Reply #7 on: Mar 7th, 2005, 8:27pm »
Good im waiting  Embarassed
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« Reply #8 on: Mar 11th, 2005, 8:27am »
Production update! I've finally figured out where I want them to go. Unfortunately the Roadblock, which may be one of the funniest and most frustrating ever, is going to take a while to finish as it involves Spanish (that's all I'm saying Smiley) . That's currently my biggest problem. I'd say, expect Pt. 2 'Veradero o falso? Umm, ambos?' by Saturday or Sunday.
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Re: Monarchk's Amazing Race Episode 1
« Reply #9 on: Mar 13th, 2005, 6:39am »
nice start... better storyline... just add some pictures to spice it up...
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« Reply #10 on: Mar 13th, 2005, 6:44am »
Pictures. Now there's an idea. I'll probably need to make multiple posts for that...make models for the racers... hmm, I'll think about it. Good idea.
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« Reply #11 on: Mar 13th, 2005, 7:09am »
try this thread of mine http://www.forumsnet.com/cgi-bin/yabb/YaBB.cgi?board=tar5game;action=dis play;num=1095843017;start=0;showall=true
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« Reply #12 on: Mar 13th, 2005, 6:08pm »
Cool This is really good so far!  Cool
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« Reply #13 on: Mar 14th, 2005, 5:08am »
Okay, seeing as how I am unable to write so much over such a short period of time, I have decided to shorten the next few episodes. That way it will be faster for both you and me. (On another note, I went a little wild with the idea and I have actually [almost] completely planned out MAR2, MAR3, and MAR4, which will be an all-star race. It will feature four teams from each of the previous three races. Hope you guys like it.)
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« Reply #14 on: Mar 14th, 2005, 8:53am »
This will be alot of time and alot of work so... mabye an episode should be every week and a haf... easier on you....I'm really looking forward to it...
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